1)Eldad Shimon was English and French teacher for two years at the Jewish school.
艾尔达德·西蒙在那所犹太学校里教过两年英文和法文。
原文中teacher是名词,在译文里改成动词“教过”。
2)The recruiting assistant made a quick decision, Skid-Row was the most likely place to find a prospective recruit.
征兵助理很快做出了决定,斯基德街是最有希望找到一个应征人员的地方。
原文中quick是形容词,在译文里改成副词“很快(地)”。