托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：雕像为谁而塑？

　　Whom in your country would you choose to build a statue for?

　　Your city has decided to build a statue or monument to honor a famous person in your country. Who would you choose? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

　　写作思路展开结构分析

　　这道题目的考点有两个，一个当然是选择哪一位名人来进行展开，另一个则是你对自己的城市到底有多少了解，换句话说，考生不仅要详细说明这位名人的事迹，同时也要把名人和当地的关联性写出来，比如名人是这个城市出身的，或者名人为这个城市做出了哪些贡献等等。这其实就相当于杜绝了很多同学随便扯大旗找一些外国名人来写的思路。

　　本话题高分范文赏析

　　If my city has decided to build a statue to honor a famous person in my country, I would choose a late singer, Teresa Teng. She was born in 1950s, and died of a severe asthma attack at age 41 in May 1995 while holidaying in Chiang Mai, Thailand, triggering an outpouring of grief among her legions of fans in Asia and elsewhere. During her brilliant stage career, favored by fans all over Asia, she moved millions of people. Her famous songs include "sweet", "story of small town", and "the moon represents my heart", etc. It was said that it was her who introduced several generations in China to a certain field of popular music.

　　Her songs have accompanied the growth and development of many people in China. In the home of these generations' soul, her sweet voice has become immortal beauty and memory. Although she's gone, her sound of singing has never vanished. She is constantly commemorated; from Beijing to Taipei, Hong Kong to Singapore, her ubiquitous fans observe her commemoration from time to time, cherishing her incredible beauty, and her voice that sounds to come from heaven. Her sweet songs made her a legend, and are still regularly heard on radio, andcontinue to have a following in Chinese communities all over the world.

　　She should be remembered not only because of her beauty and voice, but also because of her great charity. She founded "Teresa Teng foundation" during her lifetime. The purpose of the foundation is to cultivate and support gifted artists, and at the same time the foundation includes a trust to distribute scholarship to make sure that art students have opportunities to accomplish what they actually can. Every year, The Teresa Teng Foundation also send a great amount of money as a charity to help homeless children. And these activities are supported by her fans all over the world.