高考英语满分作文:2016 全国卷 I

2016 全国卷 I

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MS Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。

注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

【范文】

DearMS Jenkins,

I’m Li Hua. Iplan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. Ihave already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it.However, I am not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I am writing toask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time toread through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes interms of words and format? Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes foundin the materials and format.

    I would much appreciate it if you could dome a favor. I am looking forward to your reply.

     Yours,

     Li Hua

(译文)

亲爱的詹金斯小姐,

我是李华。我计划暑假期间在一家外企做兼职。我已经填好了申请表，也准备好了个人简历。然而，我不确定的文字和格式。因此，我写信请求您的帮助和专业的建议。您能抽出点时间通读一下附件中的材料吗?请你帮我找出用词和格式上的错误好吗?另外，我希望你能改正材料和格式上的错误。

如果你能帮我一个忙，我将不胜感激。期待您的回复。

你的,

李华