高考英语满分作文:2016年江苏卷1

2016年江苏卷

请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular inChina. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others tovote for competitions like the ＂Most Beautiful Teacher＂ and the ＂ Cutest Baby＂.

Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the ＂ Best PoliceOfficer＂ competition, organized by the local government to let the publichave a better understanding of police officers’ daily work. LiJiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by theirglorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in thefuture.

Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the ＂ FutureSinger＂ competition. He has already received three similar invitations thisweek. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the familywill win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but hefinds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is aquestion that troubles him very much.

近年来，网络投票在中国越来越受欢迎。人们不仅在网上为自己投票，还鼓励其他人为“最漂亮的老师”和“最可爱的宝宝”等比赛投票。

李江，一名高中生，被邀请在当地政府组织的“最佳警察”比赛中投票，让公众有一个更好的了解警察的日常工作。李江访问了网站并阅读了所有的故事。他被他们光荣的事迹深深感动。他已经在考虑将来自己成为一名警察。

苏华受他叔叔的邀请，在“未来歌手”比赛中为他的表弟投票。本周，他已经收到了三份类似的邀请。他的叔叔告诉他，如果他的表弟赢得了比赛，他的家庭将赢得一次免费的海外旅行。苏华很喜欢他的表弟，但他发现其他歌手表演得更好。投票，还是不投票?这是一个使他很烦恼的问题。

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2. 用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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【写作思路】

此类作文对考生的能力要求极高。首先考生要以30字概述短文内容。接下来就网络投票发表个人看法并提出理由和根据。文章要使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：

1.概述：网络投票越来越流行，几乎人人都参与了网络投票，在给人们带来好处的同时，有时候也让人进退两难不知道是否应该参加这样的投票。

2.支持：网络投票和生活密切相关，我们应该积极参与。理由及依据：（1）它是一种社会生活的方式；网络投票方便容易，不受时间和地点的束缚，同时网络投票的反馈迅速可靠；（2）虽然有时候网络投票也会给我们带来困扰，但如果有更好的参与规则，网络投票会更加规范合理。

3.反对：网络投票会给人带来负面影响：（1）人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉；（2）网络投票结果并不客观；（3）网络投票可能会被故意利用。建议考生在写作概述时，语言简练不拖沓。

【满分范文】

Possible version one:

On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitionsget people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it putsothers into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.

In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern lifeand should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in publiclife. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidatesgo around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying andvoting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, votingon the Internet makes instant feedback possible.

To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hatevoting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things willturn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people toobey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting.

(150 words)