话题八：校园生活与活动 Writing 1 高考英语高分范文2

Writing 1 　［2014年高考上海卷 ］学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：

1．你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；

2．你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。

高分范文2

Dear Editor，

It is said that our school English newspaper is taking some changes into consideration．As a loyal reader，I'm writing to you sincerely to suggest the entertainment section be canceled and the profession planning section be added．

Among the three sections of health，entertainment and culture，I enjoy the second one least．There is no denying that relaxing is to certain extent essential in addition to our students' busy study，yet the entertainment section tends to be filled with meaningless gossips or the latest development of video games，thus failing to lead to the good results which were expected at first．Students' concentration may well be distracted instead．But the health section and the culture section serve as well，offering considerate tips of keeping fit or relieving stress and broadening our horizons respectively．

To replace the entertainment section，I recommend the profession planning section，which is definitely suitable for high school students，especially us senior three students．A good plan for the future profession has great impacts on one's whole life，of which the choice of college and major is an important part．I am sure the section is of essence for it can provide various information of different professions as well as useful advice for the students who have their own unique personalities．

I believe that to choose the section of profession planning as a substitute for the entertainment section will undoubtedly make our paper more welcome，and I wish my voice could be heard．

Yours sincerely，

Cheng Fei