话题七：运动与健康 Writing 4 高考英语高分范文3

Writing 4 　［2010年上海市高三英语二模（徐汇区）］下图是某高中2014年与2016年学生健康状况调查数据图。请简要介绍一下学生健康的变化情况，分析其原因并提出相应的改进措施。

高分范文3

Shown in the chart are health conditions of the students in a senior high school in 2014 and 2016．Nearsighted students account for 87.5% of the whole students with a rise of 9.3% compared with 2014．Those who are overweight and mentally unhealthy account for respectively 36% and 26% in 2014．Worst of all，lack of sleep，has reached an astonishing figure of 90.1%，which was 80.5% in the year 2014．The reasons for the decline in health are as follows．

First，students devote too much time to smart phones and computers，which directly hurts their eyes as well as drains up their limited time，causing them to burn the midnight oil．As a result，students will perform badly in exams and feel depressed，and finally become mentally unhealthy．Secondly，increasing burden and stress deprive them of their time for sports，causing them to gain weight．Being unable to have physical exercise also accounts for their being nearsighted．

In order to improve the current situation，the most important thing is to make the students make full use of their time，that is to say，study efficiently and effectively，so that the students will be able to set aside time for sports activities as well as relaxations．Moreover，students should get rid of TV series and computer games，thus they will have more time to study or relax．Schools should also to some extent reduce the amount of homework．

In conclusion，students and schools should join hands to improve the situation．I hope that the students will be more and more healthy and active．