话题七：运动与健康 Writing 4 高考英语高分范文1

Writing 4 　［2010年上海市高三英语二模（徐汇区）］下图是某高中2014年与2016年学生健康状况调查数据图。请简要介绍一下学生健康的变化情况，分析其原因并提出相应的改进措施。

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Though the importance of health has become a heated topic in recent years，we can conclude from the chart given that high school students' health conditions are going through some bad changes．The number has grown in all problems from 2014 to 2016，and what's more，there is a remarkable rise in the overweight and mentally unhealthy．It's time to do something！

There are several matters that may be conductive to the changes．The ever increasing pressure in studies should be ranked first，as it keeps the students glued to their seats all day long overusing their eyes，thus causing more students to be nearsighted and lacking in sleep．Also，eating snacks more often may lead to obesity．And finally，failure to live up to parents' expectations and addiction to the virtual world contribute to mental unhealthy．

Luckily，there are solutions to these problems，as long as we take them seriously．First and foremost，we students should adjust our attitudes and be more optimistic．Look at the bright side of everything，and surely it will relieve some pressure．Secondly，make a timetable every day before we begin our work．It will save a lot of time and make us confident of what we are doing，which will provide us with more sleeping time and a healthier mind．Last but not least，exercise and relax your eyes regularly！

All in all，we should lay more emphasis on maintaining our health．After all，a healthy body weighs more than anything！