话题七：运动与健康 Writing 2 高考英语高分范文

Writing 2 　［上海市高三英语二模（浦东新区） ］最近学校在高中生中做了一次“有烦恼向谁说？”的调查活动，结合图表内容谈谈你自己的想法和理由。

高分范文

Dear Editor，

Recently，a survey on the topic of “Whom do you turn to when in trouble？” has been carried out in our school which has aroused a heated discussion among students．

58% of the students tend to turn to their friends and classmates in that being similar in age leads to better mutual understanding and communication while another 33% argue that teachers and parents are the right ones to turn to for so experienced and kind are they that they can be fully trusted．Apart from the above，those who refuse to share their thoughts with others account for the rest 9%．

In the case of myself，friends will be those who emerge in my mind the instance I find myself at a loss with the reasons as follows．First and foremost，due to the same environment and similar challenges to face，friends can fully understand my worries and offer me really helpful suggestions instead of those related to morality and responsibility from parents．Secondly，opening my mind and expressing my confusion to peers won't make me feel shameful or embarrassed，let alone be afraid of being scolded by them．Finally，as sorrows will only be shared with my close friends who I fully trust，such communication may enhance the friendship between us and add to our mutual understandings．

In sum，I myself favor turning to friends for help whenever I'm in trouble，but it doesn't mean it's inappropriate to share thoughts with other people．I believe everyone can find their own right way to ease their uneasiness．

Yours，

Jay