六级高分作文_低碳生活
低碳生活
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Low-Carbon Living following the outline given below. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words:
Many people have embraced a green lifestyle—low-carbon living.
Why should we live a low-carbon life?
What should we do?
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生按照给定的提纲就“低碳生活”这一话题写一篇作文。
2. 文章立意：低碳生活是环保所需，每个人都应当践行低碳生活方式。要实现低碳生活方式，政府及个人都需付出努力。
写作思路
1. 第一段引出话题——低碳生活方式。
2. 第二段阐述为何要践行低碳生活方式。
3. 第三段阐述政府和个人所应采取的具体措施。
参考范文
Low-Carbon Living
With increasing consciousness of environmental protection, many people around the world have embraced a green lifestyle—low-carbon living. 1 It is believed that if people consume less resources, the living conditions will be better.
The emergence of this trend is mainly due to the worsening environ-ment on the earth. 2 Human beings are exhausting energy resources and emitting greenhouse gases, which changed our climate and led to a chain of terrible consequences. Therefore, people should live a low-carbon life to protect our earth. 3
How do we realize it? 4 In the first place 5 , the government should limit cars because car exhaust contributes to air pollution and citizens should be encouraged to take public transportation. Besides 5 , people had better not use disposable plastic bags but the ones that can be reused. Moreover 5 , we should try our best to save energy in our daily life—switch off the lights the moment we leave a room, turn off the tap in time, and reuse textbooks and so on.
低碳生活
随着人们环保意识的不断增强，世界上有很多人拥抱了一种绿色的生活方式——低碳生活。人们相信，如果消耗的资源少一些，生活环境就会好一些。
这种趋势的出现主要是由于地球环境趋于恶化。人类消耗能源，排放温室气体，而这些行为改变了地球气候并导致了一系列严重的后果。因此，人们应当过低碳生活以保护地球。
如何做到低碳生活呢? 首先，政府应当限制汽车数量，因为汽车尾气加重了空气污染，同时，应鼓励市民乘坐公共交通工具出行。另外，人们最好不要使用一次性塑料袋，而应该使用可重复利用的袋子。再者，我们应该在日常生活中尽最大的努力节约能源：在离开房间时关灯，及时关水龙头，重复利用课本等。
范文点评
1. 点出世界上很多人拥抱低碳的生活方式。
2. 段首句紧扣提纲，点出低碳生活趋势出现的原因。
3. 段尾句做出小结，与段首句前后呼应。
4. 以问句的形式开头，增强了语气，同时体现了语言的多样性。
5. 从三个方面阐述政府和个人应该做出的努力。
要点用法
consciousness n. 意识
embrace v. 拥抱
due to 由于
exhaust v. 耗尽，使枯竭
emit v. 排放
lead to 导致
a chain of 一系列
consequence n. 结果，后果
consume v. 消耗
car exhaust 汽车尾气
disposable adj. 一次性的
reuse v. 再利用
句法点评
1. Human beings are exhausting energy resources and emitting greenhouse gases, which changed our climate and led to a chain of terrible consequences.
本句中which引导非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的整个主句，指出人们消耗能源、排放温室气体所造成的后果。
2. Moreover, we should try our best to save energy in our daily life—switch off the lights the moment we leave a room, turn off the tap in time, and reuse textbooks and so on.
用moreover引出第三层面的建议，接着具体举出了三个日常生活中常见的例子来加以说明，破折号起到解释说明的作用。
