六级高分作文_全球变暖
全球变暖
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should describe the picture, explain its intended meaning and then illustrate why we should pay more attention to global warming . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据漫画内容就“全球变暖”这一话题进行描述，并说明我们要重视全球变暖的原因。
2. 漫画解读：图片上画了两只在聊天的动物。由下面注解文字可知，它们说的是全球变暖的现象。鸭子说闻到对面的猪的味道像熏肉，夸张而又形象地表达出全球变暖的程度。
3. 文章立意：全球变暖带来了许多危害，诸如海平面上升、自然灾害等，因此需要人类对此给予足够的重视，行动起来，保护地球。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要描述漫画及注解文字，点明寓意。
2. 第二段从四个方面阐述全球变暖带来的危害。
3. 第三段呼吁人类对全球变暖给予足够的重视，并倡导人们行动起来，保护地球。
参考范文
As is depicted in the picture, weather is becoming so hot that the duck even feels that the pig smells like bacon. A little exaggerated though it sounds, it is an indisputable fact that global warming is becoming increasingly severe. 1
Global warming has negative effects on many aspects. 2 Firstly 3 , global warming may cause the icebergs to melt, which may lead to a rise in sea level. As a result, some island nations will be submerged by the sea. Secondly 3 , due to global warming, natural disasters occur frequently, such as floods, hurricanes and so on. Thirdly 3 , the ecological balance will be destroyed and many creatures will disappear for ever with the aggravation of global warming. Fourthly 3 , the cost to compensate for the loss caused by global warming will be huge.
In conclusion, global warming is a serious problem. We should pay more attention to it. Let’s take actions, start from ourselves, advocate the low-carbon way of life, and contribute our efforts to the protection of the planet. 4
正如图中所描述的，气候变得如此之热，以至于图中的鸭子甚至感到，它对面的猪已经散发出熏肉的味道。 虽然听起来有些夸张，但是全球变暖日益严重是不争的事实。
全球变暖带来的危害是多方面的。首先，全球变暖可能会导致冰山融化，海平面上升，结果，一些岛国将被海水淹没。第二，由于全球气候变暖，洪水、飓风等自然灾害频发。第三，生态平衡将遭到破坏，许多生物会随着全球变暖加剧而永远消失。第四，为弥补因全球变暖带来的损失，我们将付出沉重的代价。
总之，全球变暖是很严重的问题，我们应该更加重视这个问题。让我们行动起来，从自身做起，倡导低碳生活方式，为保护地球贡献自己的力量。
范文点评
1. 首段末句点明这幅漫画的寓意：全球变暖日益严重。
2. 自然过渡，开始讨论全球变暖带来的危害。
3. 围绕主题，分四个层次展开论述，有力支撑了全球变暖危害严重的观点。
4. 末段呼吁人们对全球变暖给予足够的重视，并倡导人们行动起来，保护地球。
要点用法
exaggerated adj. 夸张的
submerge v. 淹没
natural disaster 自然灾害
hurricane n. 飓风
ecological balance 生态平衡
aggravation n. 恶化
compensate for 补偿；赔偿
advocate v. 提倡
low-carbon adj. 低碳的
句法点评
1. A little exaggerated though it sounds, it is an indisputable fact that global warming is becoming increasingly severe.
全句是包含though引导的让步状语从句的复合句。though引导的让步状语从句使用了倒装语序，改成正常语序应该是Though it sounds a little exaggerated。后半句为该复合句的主句，主句句首的it为形式主语，真正的主语是后面that引导的从句。
2. Let’s take actions, start from ourselves, advocate the low-carbon way of life, and contribute our efforts to the protection of the planet.
使用祈使句感召力更强，take，start，advocate和contribute四个动词排比使用，更有气势。
