六级高分作文_谁笑到最后，谁笑得最好
谁笑到最后，谁笑得最好
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay explaining why he laughs best who laughs last . You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生就“谁笑到最后，谁笑得最好”这一话题进行论述。
2. 文章立意：“谁笑到最后，谁笑得最好”是大家熟悉的话语，意即坚持就是胜利。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要解释名言的含义，然后提出论点：坚持是通向成功之路。
2. 第二段通过举例论证的方式论述坚持的重要性。
3. 第三段呼应前文，再次强调坚持的重要性。
参考范文
The famous remark “He laughs best who laughs last,” which is known to us all, means that only those who are persistent can finally achieve success. 1 To put it simply, persistence leads to success. 2
Some people may claim there are always lucky dogs who achieve success overnight. But the truth is that it usually took them years of hard work. Few people know their perspiration and struggle behind their success. 3 For example, after Thomas Edison did an experiment hundreds of times but still failed, his assistant said to him, “It’s too bad that we did all that work without any results.” But Edison replied, “Oh, we have lots of results! We now know 700 things that won’t work.” Edison persisted in the experiment and eventually succeeded. 4 Winners simply do what losers don’t want to do and they keep doing it till they make it. Many people who failed did not know how close they were to success when they gave up. People don’t actually fail; they just quit too easily. So it is very important to go the extra mile. 5
Rome was not built in a day. The secret to success is to start from scratch and keep on scratching. 6
我们都知道那句名言“谁笑到最后,谁笑得最好”,意思是说只有那些坚持到底的人最终才能成功。简单地说，坚持是通向成功之路。
有人可能会说总有些幸运儿会一夜之间取得成功。但事实上,他们通常付出了多年的辛勤工作。很少有人知道他们成功背后付出的汗水和努力。举例来说，托马斯•爱迪生为了一个实验操作了几百次，结果仍然失败了，他的助手对他说：“我们做了这么多工作却没个结果，真是太糟糕了。”但是爱迪生回答说：“哦，我们已经有很多结果了！我们现在知道那700种东西是行不通的。”爱迪生继续坚持实验并最终取得了成功。赢家只是做了那些失败者不想做的事，并且坚持下去直到成功为止。很多失败者不知道他们放弃的时候离成功已经非常近了。他们其实并没有失败，只是轻而易举地放弃了。所以再多付出一点点很重要。
罗马不是一天建成的。成功的秘诀就是从头做起并坚持到底。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要解释名言的含义，指出坚持才能胜利。
2. 引出坚持是通向成功之路这一论点，紧扣作文话题。
3. 反面论证：指出一夜成名不可取。
4. 举例论证坚持的重要性，论据充分，论证有力。
5. 例证后作进一步的分析，论述坚持的含义。
6. 末段重申观点，再次强调坚持的重要性。
要点用法
famous remark 名言
persistent adj. 坚持的
to put it simply 简单地说
persistence n. 坚持
overnight adv. 一晚上
perspiration n. 汗水；努力
start from scratch 从头开始
句法点评
1. The famous remark “He laughs best who laughs last,” which is known to us all, means that only people who are persistent can finally achieve success.
本句主干是The famous remark means that...，而“He laughs best who laughs last”是remark的同位语，that引导宾语从句；句中which引导非限制性定语从句，补充说明“He laughs best who laughs last”，that引导的宾语从句中又包含了who引导的定语从句。
2. Many people who failed did not know how close they were to success when they gave up.
此句短小精悍，用到了who引导的定语从句，how引导的宾语从句，when引导的状语从句，句式变化多样。
