六级高分作文_关于冒险

　关于冒险

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on venture by commenting on the saying, “Nothing ventured, nothing gained .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

审题立意

1. 导语解读：要求考生从评论“不入虎穴，焉得虎子”入手，就冒险这一话题展开论述。

2. 文章立意：作为年轻人，应该朝气蓬勃，勇猛果敢而不是怯懦退缩，勇于冒险而不是贪图安逸。作为大学生，要敢于尝试并挑战新鲜事物，参与冒险活动。

写作思路

1. 第一段简要描述引语，然后提出论点：如果没有冒险精神，一辈子就会一事无成。

2. 第二段通过举例的方式阐述参与冒险活动的好处：培养人们的勇气和意志力等。

3. 第三段呼应前文，再次强调培养冒险精神的重要性。

参考范文

A famous saying goes like this: “Nothing ventured, nothing gained”, which means we can gain nothing if we venture nothing. It shows that the adventurous spirit is an essential quality for people to achieve success. A person who never takes any risk or tries new things will never make any progress. 1

Nowadays, there are more and more adventures like bungee jumping and rock climbing, which enjoy great popularity especially among the youth. 2 Some people argue that such activities are too risky so they never venture to try, while 3 others insist that these activities do more good than harm and should be encouraged. As for me, I agree with the latter. In my opinion 4 , people can develop courage and willpower by embarking on adventures. If a person is afraid of risks or new things, he will never experience the joy of life or make any progress. If the leaders of a country are fearful of taking risks, the country will cease to advance.

In conclusion 5 , adventures bring us many rewarding benefits. As long as we take everything into consideration and make full preparation before taking risks, we can minimize the dangers and maximize the benefits.

有一句名言是这样说的：“不入虎穴，焉得虎子”，意思是说，没有冒险就没有收获。这表明冒险精神是人们获得成功的必备品质。一个从不敢承担风险或尝试新事物的人永远不会有任何进步。

如今，越来越多的冒险活动尤其受年轻人的欢迎，比如蹦极和攀岩。有些人认为这些活动风险太大，因而从不愿意尝试，而另一些人则坚持认为这种活动利大于弊，应该鼓励。就我而言，我赞同后者。在我看来，人们可以通过参加冒险活动锻炼勇气和毅力。一个害怕冒险或尝试新事物的人永远体会不到生活的乐趣，也永远不会取得任何进步。如果一个国家的领导人害怕冒险，这个国家也只会止步不前。

总之，冒险活动会带给我们很多好处。只要我们在每次冒险前有全方位的考量并做好充分准备，就一定能将危险降至最低，并得到最大收获。

范文点评

1. 开篇简要说明谚语的含义及寓意。

2. 自然过渡，说明当今社会不乏冒险活动，并指出很多年轻人很喜欢这些冒险。

3. 采用对比论证的方法，引出人们对冒险的不同看法，紧扣作文话题。

4. 第二段后半部分明确表达自己的观点：参加冒险活动利大于弊。

5. 末段总结全文，重申观点，并指出我们应对冒险做好充分的准备。

要点用法

venture v. 冒险

essential adj. 基本的，必要的

adventure n. 冒险，冒险活动

bungee jumping 蹦极

popularity n. 流行

willpower n. 意志力，毅力

rewarding adj. 有益的

minimize v. 减到最小

maximize v. 使……最大化

句法点评

1. Some people argue that such activities are too risky so they never venture to try, while others insist that these activities do more good than harm and should be encouraged.

这是一个复合句。while在句中作并列连词用，意思为“而，然而”，表对比，相当于but，但含有对比的意思。

2. As long as we take everything into consideration and make full preparation before taking risks, we can minimize the dangers and maximize the benefits.