六级高分作文_困难面前方显其能

　困难面前方显其能

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on facing difficulties by commenting on the saying, “It is difficulties that show what men are .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

审题立意

1. 导语解读：要求考生根据引言的内容就“面对困难”这一话题展开论述。

2. 文章立意：每一个人在前进道路上都难以绕开困难，有的迎难而上，最终克服困难成为强者；有的畏难而退，最后败下阵来而成为输家。因此，如何面对困难很重要，不要惧怕困难。

写作思路

1. 第一段引入引语并解释其含义，然后提出面对困难的话题。

2. 第二段描述面对困难时的各种不同的态度，为如何面对困难做好铺垫。

3. 第三段阐述如何面对困难。

参考范文

“It is difficulties that show what men are.” The saying, which means that only difficulties can reveal one’s true colors, seems to remind everyone not to be afraid of difficulties. 1

As is known to us all, everyone will come across various difficulties or even get into trouble in their life. However, when facing difficulties, different people have different attitudes. Some feel discouraged and draw back while others rise up to them and fight bravely. Some embrace difficulties with optimism while others escape from reality and never rise above the hardships. 2 How can we face difficulties properly? In my opinion, the following approaches can help you tide over them smoothly. 3

In the first place, 4 keep positive and optimistic, which can help you go through any tough period of your life. Secondly, 4 embrace any difficulty as a gift instead of flinching from it, which allows you to appreciate your life whether you are in adversity or favorable circumstances. Thirdly, 4 never lose heart and surrender to whatever befalls, which can help you learn from your defeat and improve your ability to take a turn for the better. 4

“是困难让我们看到真正的自己”。这句话意味着只有困难才能够展示一个人的本色。它似乎也提醒着每个人都不要害怕困难。

众所周知，每个人都会遇到各式各样的困难，甚至在生活中陷入困境。然而，面对困难，不同的人会有不同的态度。一些人气馁并退缩了，而另外一些人会挺身而出并勇敢地与之抗争。一些人会乐观地接受，而另外一些人则会逃避现实并且无法从困苦中走出。如何能正确地面对困难？在我看来，如下几种方法可以帮你顺利渡过难关。

首先，应保持积极和乐观的心态，这能够帮你挺过人生中任何困难的时期。第二，像接受礼物一样接受困难，而不是去逃避，这可以使你不管在困境还是顺境中都能欣赏人生。第三，永远不要失去信心。不论发生什么都不要放弃，这可以帮助你从失败中吸取教训，提升自我，将逆境转化成顺境。

范文点评

1. 开篇引入引言，并简单加以解释，从而点出论点：不要惧怕困难。

2. 采用排比兼对比论述的方式阐明对待困难的各种不同态度。

3. 自然过渡，提出如何正确面对困难，渡过难关。

4. 分三个层次论证了如何面对困难，条理清楚。

要点用法

true colors 真面目

discouraged adj. 气馁的

rise up to 反抗

approach n. 方法；途径

tide over 渡过（难关、危机）

tough period 艰难时期

adversity n. 逆境；不幸

befall v. 降临；发生

handicap n. 不利条件；障碍

favorable adj. 有利的

句法点评

1. It is difficulties that show what men are.

本句采用的是强调句式，即：It is+被强调部分+that+其他。另外，本句中what men are是宾语从句，作show的宾语。

2. Secondly, embrace any difficulty as a gift instead of flinching from it, which allows you to appreciate your life whether you are in adversity or favorable circumstances.