六级高分作文_骄兵必败
骄兵必败
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Pride Goes Before a Fall . You can explain how you understand the saying by citing examples. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生就“骄兵必败”这一话题进行阐述。
2. 文章立意：谦虚使人进步，骄傲使人落后。
写作思路
1. 开篇引入谚语“骄兵必败”，加以简单评述，并指出可以从三个方面证明。
2. 第二段从三个方面论述骄兵必败的观点。
3. 第三段再次强调骄傲的害处，重申观点。
参考范文
Pride Goes Before a Fall
“Pride goes before a fall” is a proverb with which all of us are familiar. 1 I fully agree with it. For me, this saying can be proved from three aspects. 2
First of all 3 , if you indulge yourself in the past glory and are too proud of your success, you will overestimate your competence, which prevents you from making progress. As a result, you may neglect the potential crisis and end up in failure. Furthermore 3 , every one of us cherishes a fantastic dream in our heart—the ultimate goal of our life. If we want to make our dream come true or realize the final goal, we should never stop the pursuit of it. Lastly 3 , great men in history are always modest. Their tolerance and openness have been proved vital to their success.
Modesty makes one go forward while conceit makes one lag behind. Knowing that there is still room for improvement, we will keep making progress and perfecting ourselves. 4
骄兵必败
“骄兵必败”是一句我们都熟悉的话。我完全赞同这种说法。我认为,这句话可以从三个方面来证明。
首先，如果你沉浸在过去的荣耀中并且对自己的成功过于骄傲，你就会高估自己的能力，这就会阻止你进步。结果，你可能会忽视潜在的危机并最终失败。此外，我们每个人在心底都有一个美好的梦想——我们终极的生活目标。如果我们想实现梦想或者完成终极目标，我们就永远不能停止对它的追求。最后，历史上的伟人通常是谦逊的。他们的宽容和开明对他们的成功而言是十分重要的。
谦虚使人进步，骄傲使人落后。知道自己仍然有进步的空间，我们就会不断进步并完善自己。
范文点评
1. 开篇引入谚语，指出该谚语广为人知。
2. 自然过渡，表明自己赞同谚语的说法，并指出可以从三个方面证明谚语的观点。
3. 分三个层次论证自己的观点，条理清晰，论证有力。first of all, furthermore, lastly分别相当于firstly, secondly, thirdly，表示论述的先后顺序，应多注意积累同义表达，以避免俗套和语言的贫乏。
4. 重申观点，指出谦虚方知有进步的空间。
要点用法
indulge oneself in 沉溺于
be proud of 以……为骄傲/自豪
overestimate v. 估计过高
competence n. 能力；胜任
come true 实现
conceit n. 骄傲，自负
lag behind 落后；滞后
句法点评
1. “Pride goes before a fall” is a proverb with which all of us are very familiar.
此处用到了“with+which”引导的定语从句，which指代前面的proverb，with来自于短语be familiar with。
2. Modesty makes one go forward while conceit makes one lag behind.
本句对应中文“谦虚使人进步，骄傲使人落后”，连词while表示前后对比，常译作“而”，此处对应的中文译文前后两个分句暗含了对比、对照的意思。
