六级高分作文_人生就像一盒巧克力
人生就像一盒巧克力
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you are going to get .” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to face a changeable life . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据给定的话语，就“生活变化无常”这一话题进行简述，并阐述如何应对变化无常的生活。
2. 文章立意：生活是不断变化的，存在着很多不确定的因素。但正是这种不确定的神秘感让人不断去探求生活的秘密。因此，我们要以正确的态度来应对多变的生活。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要阐述给定话语的含义。
2. 第二段论述虽然生活有不确定性，但这种挑战让人坚强。
3. 第三段论述如何以正确的态度应对多变的生活。
参考范文
“Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you are going to get.” That means we are never quite sure what will happen in the future of our life, or simply put, life is changeable. 1
Yes, life is changeable. 2 Gains and losses interchangeably coexist in life. Many successful people accept the fact that life is short and full of uncertainties. They also think the charm of life just lies in uncertainties. Maybe failures make us exhausted mentally and physically, but we bear the heavy burden and become stronger. 3
So what should we do to face a changeable life? 4 Flowers bloom and fade; life has ups and downs. We can’t control the world but we can control our attitude towards it. If we want to have no remorse during our lifetime, cherish the present day, and live in this moment. Don’t be so depressed when we’re at the lowest point in our life because there’s nowhere to go but up. The purpose of life is to live it, to taste and experience it to the utmost, to reach out eagerly and without fear for newer and richer experiences. 5
“人生就像一盒巧克力，你永远也不知道下一颗将是什么滋味。”这句话的意思是，我们永远不能完全确信未来会发生什么，或者简单地说，人生是变幻莫测的。
是的，人生变幻莫测。得与失在人生中是交互共存的。许多成功人士接受了人生短暂并且充满不确定性的事实。同时，他们认为人生的魅力恰恰在于那些不确定性。失败可能会使我们身心俱疲，但我们也会因此忍辱负重并且变得更强大。
因此，我们要怎样面对变幻莫测的人生？花开花谢，人生起伏。我们不可能掌控世界但我们可以掌控自己对世界的态度。如果我们不想在活着的时候留下遗憾，那么就珍惜今天，活在当下。当我们处在人生低谷的时候，不要太沮丧，因为无论朝哪个方向努力，都是向上的。生命的意义在于尽情生活，拼命品味和体验，勇往直前、无所畏惧地去追求更新、更丰富的人生经历。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要描述给定话语的含义。
2. 第二段首句自然过渡，引出生活的多变，紧扣作文话题。
3. 对比论证，论述生活虽多变但却让人在克服困难的过程中变得坚强。
4. 末段首句以疑问的句式提出如何应对多变的生活，自然过渡。
5. 论述以积极的态度应对生活。
要点用法
simply put 简单地说
interchangeably adv. 可交换地
coexist v. 共存；和平共处
uncertainty n. 不确定
exhausted adj. 疲惫的
mentally adv. 精神上
physically adv. 身体上
bloom v. 开花
fade v. 凋谢；褪色
remorse n. 懊悔
句法点评
1. Many successful people accept the fact that life is short and full of uncertainties.
此句用了that引导的同位语从句，从句解释fact 的具体内容。
2. Flowers bloom and fade; life has ups and downs.
采用形象的描写，使表达显得更加生动。
