Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay according to the following instruction. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
More and more Chinese people are traveling abroad during holidays. However, some countries are not so pleasant to Chinese tourists because some of them are reported to behave irresponsibly at scenic spots. What do you think a polite tourist should be? How can a tourist be responsible?
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生针对“游客的不文明行为”这一现象写一篇文章，表达自己的观点，并说明如何成为一名文明的、负责任的游客。
2. 文章立意：许多游客的不文明行为在社会上造成了极坏的影响，人们在旅行时，需要规范自己的行为，言行有礼，成为一名负责任的游客。
写作思路
1. 第一段通过分析不文明行为造成的影响得出中心论点，我们每个人都有义务成为一个有责任心的游客。
2. 第二段针对一个有责任心的游客所要做的展开论述。
3. 第三段重申主题，每个人都应对旅行中的不文明行为感到羞耻，我们应该努力做一个有责任心的游客。
参考范文
Nowadays uncivilized behaviors of Chinese can be seen everywhere at tourist attractions around the world, which seriously damaged China’s image. 1 All conscientious Chinese should say “No!” loudly to uncivilized behaviors. Each of us has the duty to be a responsible tourist to remodel China’s image. 2
A responsible traveler should pay attention to what he says and does. 3 Firstly 4 , politeness is a must for a high-quality traveler. Secondly 4 , complying with public order can make travelling orderly and well-regulated. Thirdly 4 , we should bear in mind that preserving the environment and ecosystem is a part of showing proper manners—no littering, no spitting, no trampling on the grass, etc. Fourthly 4 , the importance of protecting cultural relics and communal facilities can’t be over-emphasized. Fifthly 4 , having a good knowledge of customs in different countries will be helpful to those enjoying an overseas tour.
To conclude, bad manners should be ashamed of by every citizen. We should try to be responsible tourists and make a contribution to the forging of shining “China’s name card”. 5
如今，世界各地景区随处可以看到国人的不文明行为，这严重损害了中国的形象。所有有良知的中国人都应该大声对不文明行为说“不”。我们每个人都有义务做一名有责任心的游客，重塑中国的形象。
一名有责任心的游客需要注意自己的言行。首先，礼貌对于高素质的游客来说是必需的。第二，遵守公共秩序可以让旅行井然有序。第三，我们需要牢记，保护环境和生态系统是展示良好行为的一部分——不随地乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰，不践踏草地等。第四，保护文物古迹和公共设施的重要性再怎么强调都不过分。第五，了解不同国家的风俗对那些喜爱出国旅行的人来说会有所帮助。
总之，我们每个公民都应该对那些不好的行为感到羞耻，我们应该努力做有责任心的游客，为打造闪亮的“中国名片”贡献一份力量。
范文点评
1. 文章首句直接描述现象及现象产生的严重后果。
2. 首段末句提出论点：我们有义务做一名有责任心的游客。
3. 指出有责任心的游客需要注意自己的言行。
4. 针对有责任心的游客所应注意的言行分五个层次展开了论述。
5. 末尾句重申主题，人们要对不文明行为感到羞耻，努力做一名有责任心的游客。
要点用法
attraction n. 旅游胜地，景区
conscientious adj. 有良心的
remodel v. 重塑
comply with 照做；遵守
bear in mind 记住；考虑到
preserve v. 保存；保护
trample on 践踏
emphasize v. 强调
be ashamed of 为……感到羞耻
forge v. 打造
句法点评
1. Fourthly, the importance of protecting cultural relics and communal facilities can’t be over-emphasized.
can’t be over-emphasized用来表示强烈的肯定，意为“再……也不为过；愈……愈好”。
2. To conclude, bad manners should be ashamed of by every citizen.
被动句式的使用，更加突出宾语转化而来的主语bad manners。