Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about the campus life that you desire most . You should state what an ideal campus life would be like and write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读:要求考生讲述自己最向往的校园生活。
2. 文章立意:每个学生都会经历校园生活。校园生活中必然会包括学业及娱乐等,如何处理好发生在校园的各种活动的关系,如何看待这些活动的轻重缓急,这些对向往的校园生活有很大的关系。
写作思路
1. 第一段首先引入话题,然后以设问的方式点题。
2. 第二段详细介绍自己最向往的校园生活。
3. 第三段总结全文,重申观点。
参考范文
Campus life is a beautiful part of our life journey. What would be the campus life that you desire most? 1
In my opinion, my ideal campus life should have the following charac-teristics. 2 Firstly 3 , as a student, learning is a top priority. It is unwise to waste too much time on entertainment. If you failed academically due to pursuing too many hobbies, it’s just like keeping the glittering casket and giving back the pearls to the seller. Secondly 4 , community activities are indispensable. Campus is the miniature of society to a certain degree. Participating in community activities is a good rehearsal for the real social life, and it’s an important opportunity for students to practice communicating skills. Last but not least 5 , it is necessary for every student to have a good understanding of career planning. In a sense, a good career planning will benefit you for your whole life.
As a whole, I wish I could live a rich and meaningful campus life. 6
校园生活是我们人生旅程中美好的一部分。你最向往的校园生活是什么呢?
我认为,我理想中的校园应该具有以下特征。首先,作为学生,学习是首要任务。在娱乐方面浪费过多时间是不明智的。如果你因为追求过多爱好而造成学业上的失败,这就像买椟还珠一样。其次,社团生活必不可少。在某种程度上,大学校园就是社会的缩影。参加社团活动,是对真实社会生活很好的预演,是学生锻炼沟通技巧的重要机会。最后一点同样重要,每个学生都有必要对职业生涯规划有很好的理解。从某种意义上来讲,一个好的职业生涯规划会让你终生受益。
总的来说,我希望自己能够度过充实而有意义的校园生活。
范文点评
1. 引入话题并采用设问的手法吸引读者注意力。
2. 首句点题,引出下文理想校园生活的三个特征。
3. 第一:学习是学生的首要任务,并解释原因。
4. 第二:社团生活必不可少,并解释原因。
5. 第三:良好的职业生涯规划会让人受益终生。
6. 重申观点。
要点用法
priority n. 优先权
academically adv. 学术上,学业上
glittering adj. 光彩夺目的
pearl n. 珍珠
miniature n. 缩影;缩图
rehearsal n. 排练,演练,预演
句法点评
1. If you failed academically due to pursuing too many hobbies, it’s just like keeping the glittering casket and giving back the pearls to the seller.
if引导条件状语从句,主句中含有“买椟还珠”的典故,为文章增添了文采。
2. Last but not least, it is necessary for every student to have a good understanding of career planning.
本句用了“it is +adj. +for sb. to do sth.”结构,表示“某人某事是……”。注意,该句型中的形容词主要描述句中不定式这一动作的性质,若该句型中的形容词用来描述主语的品质、性质等,则介词for要改为of,即该句式应变换为 “it is +adj. + of sb. to do sth.”。