On College Graduates being Village Officials
There is a great discussion on college graduates being village officials. Some people think it can bring benefits. On the one hand, it can offer employment opportunities for college graduates, which can help to solve the graduates' employment problems. On the other hand, college graduates are full of energy and knowledge and they will try their best to contribute to the village.
However, on the contrary, some people consider it does more harm than good. To begin with, college graduates lack experience, so they can be confused about what and how to do. Second, huge hope and worry can result in deep pressure, which can prevent them from continuing working on their plans. Last but not least, they may find it difficult applying knowledge to practice, because it's just book knowledge, often not matching the fact. As a result, they will give up to the difficulties.
From my point of view, it's beneficial for college graduates to work as village officials, but they should be brave enough to face the possible difficulties and resist various temptation. (176 words)
结构剖析
文章分为三段
第一段引出话题，并指出大学生当村官的两方面好处。
第二段分析了大学生做村官的坏处，并用"To begin with"， " Second"， "Last but not least"层次分明地引出了三个具体的坏处。
第三段直接说出了作者对做村官的看法：总体来说是有益处的，只是需要勇敢面对困难，坚决抵制诱惑。
关于大学生做村官
对于大学生当村官的讨论很热烈。有些人认为这能够带来好处。一方面，可以为大学生提供就业机会，这样就可以帮助解决大学生就业问题。另一方面，大学生充满精力，饱含知识，他们将尽其所能为村子做贡献。
但是，相反，有些人认为这样做坏处大于好处。首先，大学毕业生缺乏经验，所以他们会在要做什么以及如何去做方面有疑惑。其次，巨大的期望和担忧会导致深深的压力，这会阻碍他们按照自己的计划继续工作。最后，他们也许会发现把知识应用到实践很困难，因为那些只是书本知识，通常和现实不匹配。结果，他们会在困难面前放弃。
依我看来，对大学毕业生来说做村官是有益处的，但是他们应该足够勇敢地去面对有可能遇到的困难，并且抵御各种诱惑。
be full of 充满
contribute to 有助于;捐献
on the contrary
(与此)相反，正相反
to begin with 首先，起初
last but not least 最后也是相当重要的
apply to 运用;适用于
give up to 屈服于
from my point of view 依我看来
resist v. 抵抗，对抗
1. On the one hand, it can offer employment opportunities for college graduates, which can help to solve the graduates' employment problems. 一方面，可以为大学生提供就业机会，这样就可以帮助解决大学生就业问题。
2. On the other hand, college graduates are full of energy and knowledge and they will try their best to contribute to the village. 另一方面，大学生充满精力，饱含知识，他们将尽其所能为村子做贡献。
3. To begin with, college graduates lack experience, so they can be confused about what and how to do. 首先，大学毕业生缺乏经验，所以他们会在要做什么以及如何去做方面有疑惑。
4. Second, huge hope and worry can result in deep pressure, which can prevent them from continuing working on their plans. 说其次，巨大的期望和担忧会导致深深的压力，这会阻碍他们按照自己的计划继续工作。