英语听力汇总   |   2014年6月大学英语六级写作常见错误分析(十一)

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  Exercise W2

  The following topic sentences are only examples. Your sentences may be different.

  1. This is a strong topic sentence.

  2. This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph

  describes what the writer does when he or she goes to the beach. A better topic sentence would be: “Whenever I have the opportunity to go to the beach, I always follow the same routine.”

  3. This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph describes the various ways students can get to class. A better topic sentence would be: “For the many students who cannot afford a car, there are several alternative ways of getting to class.”

  Exercise W3

  These are only examples. Your topic sentences may be different.

  1. A dormitory room is cold and impersonal until several changes have been made to make it more inviting.

  2. American telephone books are divided into several sections.

  3. The fast-food restaurant has become popular for various reasons.